tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7533832208417815048.post8162836738045091116..comments2023-03-29T07:15:18.727-07:00Comments on DR. AMARJEET KAUNKE : नदी एक साँवली सी / अमरजीत कौंकेDr. Amarjeet Kaunkehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07955200308347293513noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7533832208417815048.post-62038614938499985932009-07-25T07:41:52.852-07:002009-07-25T07:41:52.852-07:00Personification......nadee se baatein kerna aur n...Personification......nadee se baatein kerna aur nadee ka aapse baat kerna behad umda bhav hai....iske liye aap beshak badhai ke patr hai....aur aapka vo nadee ka picture to bahut hi khoobsoorat laga...Poonam Agrawalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08963626868255944558noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7533832208417815048.post-27909012327382478382009-07-25T02:47:10.723-07:002009-07-25T02:47:10.723-07:00speechless........speechless........डिम्पल मल्होत्राhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07224725278715403648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7533832208417815048.post-2524145515754789502009-07-24T09:11:28.646-07:002009-07-24T09:11:28.646-07:00umdaumdakhwabo ki duniahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16003877621041203619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7533832208417815048.post-86579740121353373482009-07-24T09:08:42.590-07:002009-07-24T09:08:42.590-07:00bhaut aachha hai Amar pajibhaut aachha hai Amar pajikhwabo ki duniahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16003877621041203619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7533832208417815048.post-81170412231164932602009-07-24T09:06:18.274-07:002009-07-24T09:06:18.274-07:00Bhaut hi umda Amar pajiBhaut hi umda Amar pajikhwabo ki duniahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16003877621041203619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7533832208417815048.post-19448597143395527682009-07-24T02:26:45.120-07:002009-07-24T02:26:45.120-07:00Ek din apne saamne
saaf–sa ek aaina rakhna
phir ...Ek din apne saamne <br />saaf–sa ek aaina rakhna <br />phir uske aks par kuch likhana<br /><br />koi aisi baat<br />tum usmein kahna <br />jismein sirf tum rahna<br /><br />apne har jazbaat ke saath…<br />sab ujle-maile khwaab ke saath<br />choo lene waaley ehsaas ke saath <br /> <br />par jab bhi dhoomil ho jaaye…<br />likhane mein khud ka dikhna<br />tab kabhi nahin; tum kuch bhi likhna<br /><br />kyuonki zaroori hai <br />apne likhe mein dikhate rahna<br />aur khud ko dekhate huye likhate rahna<br /><br />tab hi <br />khud ko achcha lagega<br />aur duniya ko sachcha lagega.<br />~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~<br />…! … Subh Srijan! ... Rahe Anant!!…<br /><br />Neelesh Jain, Mumbai<br />http://www.yoursaarathi.blogspot.com/Neelesh K. Jainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09803669760277678213noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7533832208417815048.post-46078619623285500522009-07-22T23:27:23.596-07:002009-07-22T23:27:23.596-07:00wow............lajawaan........kitne gahre bhav ha...wow............lajawaan........kitne gahre bhav hain aur utna hi khoobsoorat shabd sanyojan.<br />pic jo lagayi hai kavita ke sath behtreen hai usse bhi kavita ka roop aur nikhar aaya hai.vandana guptahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00019337362157598975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7533832208417815048.post-37070259347137800572009-07-22T22:28:44.734-07:002009-07-22T22:28:44.734-07:00mere blog per aane ke liye shukriya kyonki isi ki ...mere blog per aane ke liye shukriya kyonki isi ki wajah se maine apka blog padha <br /><br />bahut khoobsurt hai apki rachanayen <br /><br />shukriyaSonalikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14526076386982042931noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7533832208417815048.post-47302823760278747822009-07-22T18:16:28.286-07:002009-07-22T18:16:28.286-07:00dear amarjeet ! It is a wonderful blog.
I like the...dear amarjeet ! It is a wonderful blog.<br />I like the poem/picture/painting combination display.<br />You are showing your artistic fibre.<br /> <br />Congratulations.<br /> <br />Ravi.ravinder ravinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7533832208417815048.post-90655978341001567212009-07-22T11:08:15.001-07:002009-07-22T11:08:15.001-07:00नदी एक साँवली सी ....कविता का शीर्षक ही अतय्धिक भा...नदी एक साँवली सी ....कविता का शीर्षक ही अतय्धिक भाया ...कविता के बहाव भी अच्छे लगे ...और सबसे ज़्यादा पसंद आई उस नदी की तस्वीर.....Renu goelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13517735056774877294noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7533832208417815048.post-67600598424300198952009-07-22T10:13:56.701-07:002009-07-22T10:13:56.701-07:00... sundar rachanaa !!!... sundar rachanaa !!!कडुवासचhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04229134308922311914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7533832208417815048.post-50385256275756640312009-07-21T18:33:28.545-07:002009-07-21T18:33:28.545-07:00i really appriciate ur poems...ur words are bigger...i really appriciate ur poems...ur words are bigger than my thinking.....gurpreetgurpreet gill canadanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7533832208417815048.post-36350859436349725602009-07-21T18:05:13.256-07:002009-07-21T18:05:13.256-07:00लफ्ज़ कम पड़ते हैं आपकी कविता के बावत कुछ कहने के ...लफ्ज़ कम पड़ते हैं आपकी कविता के बावत कुछ कहने के लिए ! लगता है कि तस्वीरों में सोचते हैं ! एक चित्र उभरने लगता है साँवरी नदी का हो या एक्वेरियम का ! तकरीबन आपकी सभी कविताओं के बिम्ब पाठक से सामने सजीव हो उठते हैं !बधाई!<br />रेखाdr.rekha maitra u.s.anoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7533832208417815048.post-41205646948913730722009-07-21T14:40:24.210-07:002009-07-21T14:40:24.210-07:00भावाभिव्यक्ति अच्छी है अमरजीत जी.
प्रकृति के बिम्ब...भावाभिव्यक्ति अच्छी है अमरजीत जी.<br />प्रकृति के बिम्बों को अच्छा प्रयोग किया है.Alpana Vermahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08360043006024019346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7533832208417815048.post-47256803404426745062009-07-21T13:41:32.678-07:002009-07-21T13:41:32.678-07:00कैसे समझाता
उस सांवली नदी को मै
कि
धुप और हवा क...कैसे समझाता <br />उस सांवली नदी को मै <br /><br />कि<br />धुप और हवा के बिना <br />जीना कितना कठिन होता है <br />कितना कठिन होता है.........<br />sahi to hai, dhoop hawa ke bina sab kathin hai...स्वप्न मञ्जूषा https://www.blogger.com/profile/06279925931800412557noreply@blogger.com